DxD: Magician Of Darkness

I've been visiting some of the old planning/writing documents, and after learning a great deal about writing (the dos and donts if you will), I feel like I could do this story a 100x better than I did the first time around. Granted, that was my first time ever writing, so I feel like I can cut myself some slack there. 

Anyhow, I'm just wondering if y'all would read this if I went ahead and did a full on redo? (and like a FULL redo with Patreon and everything, not just half-assing it in the background.)